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The moon shone bright
that Halloween night
when me and you
and the others too
realized that all was not right.

Still, onward we played,
long after my smile decayed...
Until we ceased and split
for we needed to sit
under the moon and the willow shade.

It was just you and I now,
and I'm not sure how,
but even with you next to me,
I felt utterly lonely.
...But that secret wasn't to be said aloud.

Not until now and here.
For, my dear,
we've grown apart
and it's breaking my heart.
...This means good-bye, I fear.

I loved you then and I love you still.
Always have, always will.
But I need time alone
to be on my own
and think about how I feel.
©2009-2010 ~tiffany1010200
:icontiffany1010200:

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A poem I wrote to tell someone how I felt.

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:iconmalroonee:
Such a nice poem..kinda sad and intense ^^

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:crazy:? mmm maybe
:iconbrianna-sue:
....
did you seriously break up with Your friend boy ?
!
TIFFANNNNYYY
follow your heart baby
not your friends' hearts
I love you dear

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RARRRG *eats you*
:icontiffany1010200:
i was just confused.
i said that i was sorry the next morning.
everythings fine, love.
^_^

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Don't cry for me, it's a waste of tears. I'm fine, I promise.
:icontiffany1010200:
lol
yea...kinda.
^_^
just wait til i post the sorry poem!
:D

--
Don't cry for me, it's a waste of tears. I'm fine, I promise.
:iconbrianna-sue:
FINE!

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RARRRG *eats you*

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